Tuesday, January 8, 2013

Hehe! Happy Birfday!

Okay first thing to address today is HAPPY BIRFDAY RACHEL! She probably doesn't even know this blog exsists but anywho! 
And second is, I was supposed to like twist and morph one of Disney's stories for Creative writing, which is officially my new favorite! I picked Tinkerbell because I love Faeries! Anyway, I turned Tinkerbell into mental patient and I had to change their names and the scene so here you go: Tinkerbell = Shae
... Silvermist = Rayne
...Queen Clarion = Princess Olivia
...Iridessa = Sunshine
...Fawn = Doe
...Rosetta = Rose
...Terence = Patrick.[Scene: Shae is just being born from a Dandelion seed] 

And as the dandelion seed fell lightly upside down it magically transformed into a long haired bleach blonde hair falling passed her waist. She looked around blinded by the lights  being focused on her. After a few minutes she could see a hundred faeries looking at her in awe. She collapsed.
She woke later in a completely white room with nothing but the bed the was lying in. There was a water fae tending to her, she had long black hair and the clearest blue eyes. She had a dainty voice. The lights were hurting Shae's sensitive eyes and she must've noticed because she ran over to turn off the lights apologizing the whole way, her wings were the most beautiful of blues. 'Hi, I'm Rayne. . . ' She introduced herself awkwardly. Shae smiled as sweetly as she could. Rayne then remembered that this faerie hadn't yet had her talent chosen. She ran out of the room after saying that she'd be right back. Shae said her own name quite confidently to herself. 
An hour later Rayne returned with five other fae. There was four girls and a single boy.  The boy was covered in dust and looked a little embarrassed, but Shae thought he was cute, with his shaggy blonde hair that he constantly swept out of his eyes. Then there was a tomboyish looking girl wearing a longer orange shirt and she had a long braid in her hair, she introduced herself as Doe. Then a black girl with a bun, and a yellow sunflower seed dress said her name was Sunshine. And after that a preppy girl with a pink tulip dress and too much make up said her name was Rose, and honestly introduced the very quiet boy who looked at her like there was no one else in the room, was Patrick and he thought the Shae was adorable. He blushed even more and then looked at Rose as if he was plotting revenge. 
After everyone had made their introductions the last faerie left was the most tall, elegant, graceful faerie ever. And she silenced  the other fae in one thought. Princess Olivia had a telepathic connection with all of them.
'I am Princess Olivia.' She stated
'Shae.' Shae replied with a smile
'Yes, I've acknowledged-' She said coldly 'now, to choose your talent close your eyes and calm yourself.'
Shae thought this strange but did it anyway. She closed her eyes impatiently and breathed. Nothing was happening. This lasted for 20 or 30 minutes, until Shae heard gasps from almost everyone. She opened her eyes after feeling a searing pain all over her body. There were tattoo's of pipes running all over her body, they were burning into her skin. Shae screamed until her voice box ripped in half or so it seemed.
She looked around and realized there was a straight jacket on her. she looked around as a girl with long black hair, beautiful big blue eyes, and a dainty voice came in to give her her pills. After Shae calmed down a bit, the girl leaned down and said I like your wings. And as she was walking away Shae saw to beautiful baby blue wings with feathers. And as she looked behind her there were golden metal wings but they fluttered hopelessly under the strain of medication.

What do you think? I changed it a bit since I read it aloud in class but I like this one much better. Oh and guess what else I finally have 40 elements memorized! I'll be at 113 in no time! Lol So, I have a new obsession it's called Bleach! OMG I love it so much! Ichigo is so. . . . .  AMAZING!

1 comment:

  1. Okay...
    1. I like the mental idea better for Shae
    2. It's 118 elements, not 113
    3. WHAT THE FREAKING HECK IS BLEACH? I am your best friend, so you are NOT obsessed unless I know what it is.

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